My class oral presentation

Laura Solà:  First she went with her horses, in Cantoni, and second in Tossa de Mar.

Carlota Perez: First she went in Poole, second in a Cruise and finally in la Molina.

Monica Nogué: First she went in Berga, second in Banyoles and finally in l'Escala.

Marta Oliver: First in Almeria, second in Poole and finally in Platja d'Aro, Calonge and Dublin.

Bernat Díaz: First he went in Cantoni, second in Platja d'Aro 

and finally he return to Banyoles.

Paula Corominas: First she stayed in Banyoles, and finally in Tarragona.

Jordi: First he went in Berlina second in Banyoles and finally he prepared all the thing for school.

Pau: First he went to Platja d'Aro, second in Tossa de Mar and finally in Banyoles.

Marta T: First she went in her grandparents house second in Andorra and finally in camlló.

Mireia N: First she went in Berlin, second in Poole and finally Platja d'Aro and Banyoles.

Mireia F: First she went in Andorra, second in l'Estartit and finally in Banyoles.

Nuria: First she went in Cantoni, second in Poole and finally in Costa azul.

Julia: First she went in a cruise in Italia and greek islands and finally in Juanetes.

Pol: First he went to Platja d'Aro, second he went in a ship and finally he prepared all the things for school.

Gerard: First he went to Cadiz, second to Sanlucar and finally he went to Banyoles.

Blanca Lleal: First she went to England Poole, second she went to India and finally she went to Pals.

Esther: First she went to Cantoni, second to Granada and finally she went to Italy.

Enric: First in Praga, second in Berga La Patum and finally in Banyoles.

Bernat Riu: First he stayed in Banyoles, second  to Delta de l'Ebre and finally he prepared all the things for school.

PRESENTATION

- Did you use any resources?Yes I did

- Were the resources relevant and attractive?No more

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT

- Did you look at your audience most of the time?No I didn't

- Did you read from your notes?Yes I did

- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? No I didn't

    STRUCTURE AND CONTENT

STRUCTURE

- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance?Yes I did

- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear?Yes I did

(First, then, secondly,on the one hand, on the other hand,

finally..)

CONTENT

Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience?Yes I did

- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..?No I didn't

was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original? Yes I did

  LANGUAGE and PRONUNCIATION

LANGUAGE

- Did you check your grammar?(verbs, word order)No I didn't

- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary?No I didn't

(synonyms, new words, expressions..)

- Did you use sentence linkers?(and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although,however..)No I didn't

- Did you use  fillers?(well, you know, for example, one second..)Yes I did

 PRONUNCIATION AND INTONATION

- Did you know how to pronounce all your words?Yes I did

- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher?Yes I did

- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time?No I didn't

Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? Interruptions

My last Summer

First: Platja d'Aro 

Second: A ship

Finally:Prepare for school 

Every day I went with my family in the beach. There are fabulous beaches in the Costa Brava, I went fishing with my father and my grandfather.I went with my family on a ship around the Mediterranean Sea the name it’s Celebrity Solstice, the ship are very big and spectacular. Every day I went to the pol and I played golf with my cousins.  After holidays I prepare the material and I am buy the new books, the new bag and a case.

Last summer presentacion

Vie

The royal wedding

1-We used powerpoint some pictures and didn't bring many objects.We spent 1:11 minuts.

2- I didn't look the audience because I read

3-I organize my ideas.

4-The information are correct

5- The information are correct but I reapet some words.

6-I pronounce well

My final mark is: Notable

I improve with don't read and the esplication and don't post nervous